Tuesday, June 1, 2010
Friday, May 21, 2010
novel pitch
This novel "Starphire" is a book for tweens & teens. Victoria StarAngel is a 14 year old girl who is very different from other students in her school. She's Staravan. A Staravan is a person with special powers like a super hero. But Victoria does believe she is special. It will take a lot work for her to see who she really is.
This novel will entertain readers because it talks about a girl becoming someone greater than any peson in the unvisire.
Sample Chapter for "Starphire"
CHAPTER 2
"Life can hit. HARD!"
How dare she!! I can't believe it! I'm a "Staravan"! That's so stupid! I can't believe my mother lied to me about me being a special person with powers no one has in the universe! HA!! At least that's what I thought.
Here's what happened....
I came back from school early 'cuz I send the cheerleaders flying during gym.
It was funny!!
So my mom said to me when I came home was that she needed to talk to me. I changed my clothes,in my bedroom, in under 10 seconds (my personal best). Then I came to the living room to talk to my mom.
First she said " OK,Vicki what happened in school today." I told her about the cheerleaders and what came out of my hands. That's went she said,"OMG,I thought I could keep the secret from you ."
"What secret?" I asked.
My mom said, "Your very special Vicki ."
"Special? As in SPECIAL ED!! Mom, why didn't you tell me I was in special ed?! Wait,so I'm in the class?! How could you?!" I said.
"No, not special ed Vicki ,special meaning you have powers."she said.
"Wow, really special powers? That is the most dumbest thing I ever heard in my life. Mom ,why the fudge brownies would you lie to me? 'Cuz what you just said was just wacky!!" I said.
"No it's not Vicki!! It's true,I'm not lying!!" she said.
"Whatever Mom I need to finish my homework 'cuz I got a big test tomorrow. So later." I ran to my room and did my homework until 6:30. Then I got a sandwich for my refrigerator. Yes I have my own refrigerator. So cool!! But why would my mom lie to me.
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Nothing else happened in school or anything for a month. In February my boyfriend took me to a fancy restaurant called "La Garters" meaning "The Frog"!!
Then two days before my birthday (April 1,1995) I met someone I never thought I would meet. Her name is Veronica. She's my twin sister! Like OMG I got a twin!! YES I HAVE A TWIN SISTER!! I met her in my favorite store in the world!! It's called "In My Shoes". I know that has to be the most dumbest name for a store!! But they have GREAT SHOES!!
You might be thinking that 'OMG thats sooo great to have a twin!' It's NOT!!
So here's what happened...
I was at "In My Shoes" to buy some new shoes that came out in the store. It was two days before my birthday(March 29th).
(I must warn you this part happened just like in the movie "Twitches" but funnier!!)
So I was in the store then a new employ pushed me down! I got up and smacked her without even looking at her!! Like how dare she!! Then there was a fight!! I,Victoria Veronica StarAngel, won the fight of course!! Then when she got up I SCREAMED!! She looked just like me!! The hair, the clothes, the everything!! But I got more style in my clothes and hair than her, but THE HAIR,THE CLOTHES, EVERYTHING!!
I have a twin. I, Victoria Veronica StarAngel,has a twin sister. I'm just as shocked as you are!!
Then Veronica screams too!! We walk up to each other, stared at each other for a while. Then at the same time we say " I'm a twin?"
Veronica asked me "What is your full name?"
I said " Victoria Veronica StarAngel."
" My name is Veronica Victoria StarAngel" she said.
Then out of nowhere security guards kicked us out. They literally kicked us out!! Like what the f--k is wrong with their f--king mind !! Excuse me for my behavior. But then out of all people Veronica starts cursing them out. She said words I never knew before!! So bad I can't write them down!! I stop Veronica from getting in trouble. Then she punched me in the stomach. HARD. That's when I started to think Veronica is NOT COOL NOR NICE.
Here's what happened....
I came back from school early 'cuz I send the cheerleaders flying during gym.
It was funny!!
So my mom said to me when I came home was that she needed to talk to me. I changed my clothes,in my bedroom, in under 10 seconds (my personal best). Then I came to the living room to talk to my mom.
First she said " OK,Vicki what happened in school today." I told her about the cheerleaders and what came out of my hands. That's went she said,"OMG,I thought I could keep the secret from you ."
"What secret?" I asked.
My mom said, "Your very special Vicki ."
"Special? As in SPECIAL ED!! Mom, why didn't you tell me I was in special ed?! Wait,so I'm in the class?! How could you?!" I said.
"No, not special ed Vicki ,special meaning you have powers."she said.
"Wow, really special powers? That is the most dumbest thing I ever heard in my life. Mom ,why the fudge brownies would you lie to me? 'Cuz what you just said was just wacky!!" I said.
"No it's not Vicki!! It's true,I'm not lying!!" she said.
"Whatever Mom I need to finish my homework 'cuz I got a big test tomorrow. So later." I ran to my room and did my homework until 6:30. Then I got a sandwich for my refrigerator. Yes I have my own refrigerator. So cool!! But why would my mom lie to me.
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Nothing else happened in school or anything for a month. In February my boyfriend took me to a fancy restaurant called "La Garters" meaning "The Frog"!!
Then two days before my birthday (April 1,1995) I met someone I never thought I would meet. Her name is Veronica. She's my twin sister! Like OMG I got a twin!! YES I HAVE A TWIN SISTER!! I met her in my favorite store in the world!! It's called "In My Shoes". I know that has to be the most dumbest name for a store!! But they have GREAT SHOES!!
You might be thinking that 'OMG thats sooo great to have a twin!' It's NOT!!
So here's what happened...
I was at "In My Shoes" to buy some new shoes that came out in the store. It was two days before my birthday(March 29th).
(I must warn you this part happened just like in the movie "Twitches" but funnier!!)
So I was in the store then a new employ pushed me down! I got up and smacked her without even looking at her!! Like how dare she!! Then there was a fight!! I,Victoria Veronica StarAngel, won the fight of course!! Then when she got up I SCREAMED!! She looked just like me!! The hair, the clothes, the everything!! But I got more style in my clothes and hair than her, but THE HAIR,THE CLOTHES, EVERYTHING!!
I have a twin. I, Victoria Veronica StarAngel,has a twin sister. I'm just as shocked as you are!!
Then Veronica screams too!! We walk up to each other, stared at each other for a while. Then at the same time we say " I'm a twin?"
Veronica asked me "What is your full name?"
I said " Victoria Veronica StarAngel."
" My name is Veronica Victoria StarAngel" she said.
Then out of nowhere security guards kicked us out. They literally kicked us out!! Like what the f--k is wrong with their f--king mind !! Excuse me for my behavior. But then out of all people Veronica starts cursing them out. She said words I never knew before!! So bad I can't write them down!! I stop Veronica from getting in trouble. Then she punched me in the stomach. HARD. That's when I started to think Veronica is NOT COOL NOR NICE.
Saturday, May 8, 2010
Biography: Victoria StarAngel
Victoria is a 15 yr old girl living in New York City. In the story (Starphire) Victoria Talks about her adventures when she was 14. Victoria is a Staravan. A Staravan is a person with special powers. Victoria is a very special Staravan. She is the next person in line to be Queen in Starava. If Victoria could beat her evil twin,Veronica.Veronica is also in line for Queen but the girls must fight to see how is the right girl to be Queen in Starava.
6 main events in "Starphire"
- Victoria sends the cheerleaders flying during gym.
- Ms. Leecolls tells Victoria who she really is.
- Victoria meets her father.
- Victoria meets her evil twin.
- Victoria gets even with her twin in Starava.
- Victoria and Veronica fight and Victoria is Queen Victoria in Starava
Thursday, April 29, 2010
The characters in "Staphire"
Victoria StarAngel-main character
Veronica StarAngel-evil twin sister
Vannessa Leecolls-Victoria's mother
Jimmy StarAngel-Victoria's father
John StarAngel-Victoria's kind uncle
JJ McVinne-Victoria's boyfriend
Veronica StarAngel-evil twin sister
Vannessa Leecolls-Victoria's mother
Jimmy StarAngel-Victoria's father
John StarAngel-Victoria's kind uncle
JJ McVinne-Victoria's boyfriend
Monday, April 26, 2010
Sunday, April 18, 2010
Thursday, April 8, 2010
joke from my friend joy
Gemstone462 Old Mcdonald sittin on bench picking his butt with a monkey wrench missed his butt and hit his balls peeded all over his overalls went to the creek to wash them off big fish came and bit them off went to the doctor an he said sry sir ur balls r dead
TODAY!! Thurs. April 8, 2010
Today was so... CRAZY!! i LOST MY WALLET!! It had my keys, metro card,I.D card,AND 10 dollars!! I cried,and cried. My mom wasn't mad. She just said "it's OK."!! OMG!! Yes she said it's OK. Wow I can't believe she THAT!!
Anyway I'm helping 3rd graders for their reading in a few weeks. So fun!!I got to go!!
peace out!!,
Queen CutieCity24
a.k.a QueenMmachi!!
P.S. I hope I get my wallet back!!
Anyway I'm helping 3rd graders for their reading in a few weeks. So fun!!I got to go!!
peace out!!,
Queen CutieCity24
a.k.a QueenMmachi!!
P.S. I hope I get my wallet back!!
Wednesday, April 7, 2010
TODAY!! Weds. April 7,2010
I go to school at FDA (Frederick Douglass Academy)!!Today was sooo... AWESOME!! No one made fun of me in school today everyone thinks I'm cool!! It's so AWESOME!!!!
Anyway my birthday was April 1 and I got a new phone called the samsung exclaim!! It's not touch screen though! Everyone was asking to see my phone in school !! So weird 'cuz everyone hates me in my school!!
peace out to my people,
Queen CutieCity24
a.k.a QueenMmachi
Anyway my birthday was April 1 and I got a new phone called the samsung exclaim!! It's not touch screen though! Everyone was asking to see my phone in school !! So weird 'cuz everyone hates me in my school!!
peace out to my people,
Queen CutieCity24
a.k.a QueenMmachi
Friday, February 12, 2010
greek and roman gods names
Thursday, January 28, 2010
quiz:common nouns
1.Nouns are :
a. a,an,the
b. person,place,thing,or idea
c. ice cream
2.What are common nouns?
a. hate
b. are general nouns
c. are cookies
3.What are proper nouns?
a. specific things
b. la,la,la,la
c. Karla
4.examples of common nouns:
a.Barnie and friends
b.friend,shop,donuts
c.Doctor,nurse,mommy
(ans.1.b,2.b,3.a,4.c
a. a,an,the
b. person,place,thing,or idea
c. ice cream
2.What are common nouns?
a. hate
b. are general nouns
c. are cookies
3.What are proper nouns?
a. specific things
b. la,la,la,la
c. Karla
4.examples of common nouns:
a.Barnie and friends
b.friend,shop,donuts
c.Doctor,nurse,mommy
(ans.1.b,2.b,3.a,4.c
Monday, January 25, 2010
life
life is hard,life is crazy
the more you sleep,the less you get lazy
i may be in vain,but its still a pain
the life of a girl is just a shame,shame,shame
the more you sleep,the less you get lazy
i may be in vain,but its still a pain
the life of a girl is just a shame,shame,shame
Tuesday, January 5, 2010
The Watsons are very good parents.But they have a very hard time with Byron because Byron is very dumb. I would like to live with the Watsons famliy.
The Watsons are very good parents because they teach their kids respect and displined. They are very hard working when it comes to their kids. In chapter 7, Mr. Watson shaved byron's head because byron put toxies in his hair so Mr. Waton shaved his head.
The Watsons are very good parents because they teach their kids respect and displined. They are very hard working when it comes to their kids. In chapter 7, Mr. Watson shaved byron's head because byron put toxies in his hair so Mr. Waton shaved his head.
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